Wednesday 20 June 2012

suddenly(5)-The world's abnormal.....


The mystery continues...........
                                       -priyaani
Heida was so pleasant to see that even her betrayed self was pleasure for David and he thought  to himself something was desperately wrong with him!....The night went by easily with Heida seated beside him.The terrible day beckoned the trial only sooner.And injustice smelt in the air.Rituals like assembling were practised.So simply did Heida get up to the order and take a stand there.No feelings escaped her eyes, though at night David had in the street light seen the drop make it's way as he tried to embrace her with his tied hands!Now a professional replaced her.His end was near and Heida was the only thing he could think of.Then suddenly
"Any last wish u treachery's son?"shouted the now assistant........getting the volts ready for the physical shock.
David looked most sympathetically  towards his new found brother.....addressed him and said
"pay me some in return i give u all but let this man who hasn't known of his identity live a moment........i do not plead but demand!"....there was a steady voice and Edison thought him to be the rightful brother
Edison looked at him so suddenly as if he were disturbed from his tormented world of money........wickedly smirked and running his hands over the brow "twas all decided.was it not?"....taking a short step towards him "or was the notice too short for a weakling that which u inherit from father too..."and he deliberately pinched Davids skin near the wound and it soon gave way!
Heida
David not shaken yet went on "another night with Heida.....after 8yrs i see her now i want some moments as memory for i have not the pleasure of family like u did........"
The man turned into a monster"and family u say where saving petrol was more important , where mother was no more and father was about all himself!......"he shrugged his shoulders and waved his arm to shoo away the depression and was back to normal.Turning to Heida he said"such girl if u meet now u should fall in love.....so i presume but for today i rent u her!"and he banged the door behind him leaving Heida no choice.
The words 'rent' pinched him hard......what had become of this girl and she said this is what she needed?
But then thoughts were deviating in the other way.Heida's weakness was like his weapon......the limited time he had to live it!This last chance would actually determine the life of any one David or Heida.
They remain in the same room like both of them had an argument and waited for the other to persuade.They remained isolated for some time until David coughed his lungs out.Heida came running to render her services.He carefully looked into her eyes to see guilt,repent or any sign of pity.It was all there he presumed.He desperately tried to rise his arms to embrace her once again. Heida's eyes were now sore........not as pretty as last night.She carefully placed her arms to pacify David  "calm down David!.....calm down"and more drops gave way.


"I've missed u so long!"....David looking into her eyes
Heida turned round "I couldn't believe u'd have wanted to stay the last time before death with me......the one who deserted u!........i hate myself"
"it was my fault......i couldn't give u all.....and forget it now u must have had reasons"David lied
......."Heida i want to hug u once let my hands....."he tried to gauge her faithfulness for the Edison tribe.He thought if she could let go of it in love why not now?his logic desperately arguing with itself making assumptions now and then.
Heida was very near him before he realised....she quickly looked around went to a small corner and detached something which David predicted to be the camera and bent over him to release his hands.She carefully caressed his shoulder wound and washed it with some water.
"now u can do as u wish......but remember ur folly will take my life!"she shuddered.
David bent forward to hug her with the right and slowly brought his left arm closer.......a sharp bed rod had escaped into his palm from the rust........
then all of a sudden a tap on the window by he looked up in horror but it was the morning girl(Estella he immediately beckoned).She used a cutter to make way in the glass.Minutes later the road saw a lone couple rushing the way up......and on the way he said"You?How?.....i mean"and a sharp "Later....."followed.On their way they saw a snake charmed and he played the tune so odd like it were meant to dance to!David found him weirdly recognisable but he couldn't place him exactly.


Hours later when it was time for David's execution the troop got ready to assemble.The sheet unusually wrapped David and Heida with her slender body screened the huge muscles- looked weird to Schuld.He methodically arranged for the volts and approached the bed.He ordered Heida to move away but she wouldn't obey.He tried to separate her but the body was so resistant......and his eyes fell on the bed.The palm felt wet and he looked at it.......Heida was bleeding she was stiff with rigor mortis and the bed was a bluff!He removed the sheet and shouted in despair.Edison was uncontrollable and he shot the dead girl again!!!!!


After miles of running Estella slowed down and took him by the shirt and pointing she said "here it is ur to stay...., my father's place ur secure and be careful though ur safe here!father's out of station.....i'll come everyday to see u and get u some food if i can"her remorse mind repeating itself to shut up to calm down every time when she saw David.She opened the door with keys she had smuggled from the house.In front lay a warm large room leading into 2 separate passages and a lavatory .The kitchen was a small one and David stared at it as if he had won a fortune.Meanwhile he didn't realise the girl had almost made a farewell.He desperately called out"mind staying for some coffee, i can't make it!"David lied again....
Estella when we 1st say her

The girl turned back "sure" and smiled back.....as if boys could be so helpless some times and that gave her some trivial joy.
As she prepared some coffee the conversation took to great heights.David was desperate to know how she was there for rescue at all times and why did she help him when she saw him murder.
"ur questions are escaping ur eyes"as she looked at David...his eyes to be precise
Estella replacing Heida unknowingly
she contd. "let me say then u can say again...."with a space she said"it's not obvious......i've tried to solve all this myself but it has no ans. , why somehow i can't just resist helping u, i just know ur innocent even when i see u as a murderer.....i've tried to get it but all in vein.....i'm stuck right there."she stopped to look at David to see him in disbelieve or convinced."I know this way must be avoided but today i was hell late and mother rang me some several times......i couldn't tell her that i was only busy here for father has planned surprise for her........i rushed through this way and as of those few days u happened to be on the way again.....and again in danger.I luckily have this glass cutter for i worked on some pieces recently to shape them brilliantly.........and i saved u because i simply as any other day felt nice about it that's it".....while she said she took him to the 1st passage rooms, one of which was remarkably decorated and some very fine class cut pieces found their way in.It so brilliantly reflected the morning light that it shone like disco lights and the edge of some so finely cut that light separated to  form rainbow.David gaped at the talent.......he was not just convinced but all in love with it.In some time she came with 2 cups of coffee and David loved his share.....he was amused at his 2nd lie.....he was sure to  always have coffee made from her.As she walked into her pink shoes David took her hand held it firmly and said"thankyou!my this life is yours......".he assured.She reluctantly drew away her hand and from a distance waved him back.A joyous crazy girl he thought.Next morning the newspaper was slipped in.When he tried to follow the guy he lost track but a sudden turn only made his conscience prick harder.He just couldn't understand why he felt he knew this guy..........

1 comment:

  1. HEIDA oi lok tar past gf chlo r oke chere diyechilo heida because of material benefits.To oke lok ta dekhe ekhane aj krche....k kaj bujhe ne!.....ar lok ta oke dekhe emotional hoi pore bt then oh actually oke use kre palate.Jei meyeta okeage help kreceh tar name estella....heroine f the plot.Oh oke help kore palate just in time ar bari ta or babar->so borosoro help.Lok ta heida ke bhule oke estella diye replace krte lage as estella ke pochondo hte suru kre.......Estella r to or opor crush achei!!!!!He's the man with the black jacquard.
    -p1

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